Assignment 3, Revised (U C what I C)

After I received feedbacks from peers and tutor, I have amend the story a little bit. Let see whether it is better ?

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Got the story ? I guess so. Haha. Let me tell you the true story.
1. I was walking back to my room and I saw a guy stand in fornt of a tree.
2. When I walked closer to him, his posture show that he was "peeing".
3. I was wondering why he will pee in front of the tree.
4. I was trying to stop him
5. When he turn around and I found out he was not "peeing" in front of the tree.
6. He was text messaging.
7. I felt so embrarassing and said sorry to him.
8. He punched me because I disturbed him.

Hope you enjoy the story.